Fix my draft | English homework help

this is my first draft, the comments are posted, i need them done.

exercise:

2. Look at an essay or a report that you have written for one of your classes. Have you quoted any sources? If so, how have you integrated the quotation into your own text? How have you introduced it? Explained what it means? Indicated how it relates to your text? If you haven’t done all these things, revise your text to do so, perhaps using the Templates for Introducing Quotations (p. 43) and Explaining Quotations (p. 44). If you’ve not written anything with quotations, try revising some academic text you’ve written to do so.